The fat old moon will grow jealous and crack and fall into the sea.
That is how I will love you.
The whole world is a silver surface, and then it is shattered.
photo by jimmy joe
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This was a response to Trifecta Writing Challenge's first weekend prompt. We were asked to write a love story using exactly 33 words. You can read more little love stories and link up your own H E R E.
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14 comments:
Um ... yum! <3 You write like no one else I know. And I love it.
the fat old moon will grow jealous . . .
perfect!
Beautiful imagery...bleak and beautiful at the same time. I do love your style, Amanda! Go get published if you haven't already! You have such great talent!!
My heart just ached a little when I read that. You are wonderful!
Very powerful.
I love the 'fat old moon' - it makes me imagine the moon as someone standing between the persona and the beloved.
I love the way you toss words across the page.
That first line is to be savored. Delicious.
Came from the Trifextra link.
Amanda, that first line is exquisite. I love the way you write and I'm yet to click on one of your posts and come away disappointed. We're lucky to have you contributing every week.
Congratulations on winning the challenge....well deserved. So spare and yet so rich. Well done.
This stirred tears. Congrates on second place. Beautiful. X
Visiting from the writing challenge.. Yours is very lovely. I also read ur "about me" page and loved. So well written. I'll be back.
Visiting from the writing challenge.. Yours is very lovely. I also read ur "about me" page and loved. So well written. I'll be back.
gorgeous
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